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- Alone In A Crowd
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Sitting in this room
Surrounded by my friends
Laughing on the outside
But my crying never ends
I keep it all inside
Waiting for that day
When all my fears and darkness
Will be completely gone away
But will that day come
Will it ever arrive
When my feelings of despair are gone
And I really feel alive.
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LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
Here we go, another punctuation alert.
Interogatives and the only mark is a single period at the end. Detracts from a decent piece.
