- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The road before me
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The road before me
snakes upward
along the narrow ridges
and sheer mountain walls
there's a steep incline
this path ahead of me
the chances are
I am likely to fall
but there. ahead
in the distance I see
through low hanging clouds
at this mountain's peek
the sun shining bright
a beacon that guides me
the light of enlightenment
and wisdom that I seek
by Art~
- COMMENTS
Maria2394over 12 years agoand your sneaky "little" device- "peek" rather than peak, as in a mountain peak, was valuable to me, as a reader. I took a lot from this poem and I am sure I will read it again. In this line, I would lose the "the"-----(along the narrow ridges)
enjoyed the read-
~ m
p.s., I tried to vote, but my vote would not register, but it would have been a 5. I will try again later.
