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Click hereYou love his words
tumbling, rolling, rippling, roilling
avalanching into your head
sweeping away your doubts
remaking your hopes
transforming the landscape of your past
making his words yours
making his dreams alive
making you fly
You love his promises
Drifting seeping sifting settling
snow covering your pain
painting pictures of a future
full of hope and love
with pain and service to a kindly master
making his hopes yours
making his desires alive
making you thrill
But we can't stand by
watching words and promises
win your heart
body mind and soul
What is real is yet to be
Truth and touch
the facts of life
You trust his future
We see his past
And fear
been there, been screwed like that. Such insight, I just had to fave this poem. You show some real talent. I'm loving your poetry so far.
~ maria