- Erotic Poetry
- soft lace and thunder
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soft lace and thunder
the space between
defines
your gaze i wonder
married cloud reflected in a mirror pool
have the heavens fallen
or do i rise
- COMMENTS
buttersover 12 years ago...made to be savoured, considered, the spaces between contemplated as much as the words and images separating them
a write that has me musing to myself, catching reflections. thankyou for submitting this.
twelveooneover 12 years agoThe objects of poetry are a sense of wonder, usually met by originality, and not saying too much. This does it for me.
"married cloud reflected in a mirror pool"
a line I've never seen before, and a question at the end
or do i rise
A five
