Persistent

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Kat0511
Kat0511
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Persistent now in the pounding
and clawing to get out
and aching deep inside
the need is almost too much
Pull the knife out
and let me bleed
Or twist it in deeper, if you want
as long as I get what I need
I am so much larger than life now
that I could swallow you whole
Fill me on the inside
I want to taste your soul...


Kat0511
Kat0511
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ImagetakerImagetakerover 11 years ago
Strong Image

"I want to taste your soul" is a powerful hook.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
TRY TILL YOU SUCCEED

or fake it till u make it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
wicked good!

You show an intimate use of off rhyme, which is a talent in itself and the content is strong and mind blowing. Loved this poem! Good work!!

~ maria

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
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The words, inside, deep, swallow, taste, need etc. give it an erotic tinge, but the need seems much more emotional than physical. Well done.