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Click hereTired of being the receptor of the sword
I want to march into battle, guns drawn
blazing fear into every man who crosses
the pussy hiding between this woman's legs.
I want to be the hardened
general leading troops into battle
give ME balls! I have earned them
surviving invasion after invasion-
Ahh, remember
the strength, the control, the surrender?
Wait! I cannot afford to reminisce
not at a time like this.
I must learn to assert my independence
to maintain this female erection.
Step aside, you foul-smelling flunkies
time for a change in strategy.
Fuck them 'til they're too tired to fight
subdue them as they dream.
Exactly what i came here in need of and you gave it to me! perfect.
And roll away the critics:)
I love the rhythmic strength of this, the in-your-faceness. Total delight.
Imagination has been put to good use here. I really liked the first line in particular. "Receptor" sounds almost regal, something soon to be Queen Elizabeth might have said. Don't feel the same about "pussy." The use of it in the title suggested irony to me whereas the whole poem suggested suppressed anger ready to be unleashed.
As one with a sword, I'm thoroughly subdued, but I like it that way so I wouldn't be good spoils of war. I think Public Comments should allow emoticons because this poem would get the roaring kitty for sure!