- Erotic Poetry
- In the Adirondack Clouds
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Two silver manes
regard a babbling brook.
She reaches into his lap,
with an arthritic liver-spotted claw,
circling his hardness
with an okay sign,
feeling him grow as she pumps him,
two fingers juggling his balls,
as she remembers
his insatiable mouth between her legs.
his lips squeezing her bud,
his hands mauling her breasts,
while her cunt devoured his face,
her hands gripping his hair,
as she cried out in the mountain night,
her waters flowing over him
like the stream flowing down to the sea,
but not just yet.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerover 11 years agoExcept for this thing I have about the word "cunt," except perhaps where there's anger or catharsis, this is one of your best.
tazz317over 11 years agowhether to reminesce or re live a past time. TK U MLJ LV NV
twelveooneover 11 years agoTwo silver manes
regard a babbling brook.
She reaches into his lap,
with an arthritic liver-spotted claw,
ended well too
Desejoover 11 years agoWow - This takes graphic to a whole new level.
The choice of like 'claw' and 'mauling' is what makes this unusual and powerful.
I like the use of water in the beginning and end too. The title is also an interesting choice.
