- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Fall Fell
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereFall fell through the
crack in the floorboards, and we
tore them up, desperate to
stave off Winter.
Maybe we could
burn them if we cannot find that
lost dime, our
last hope of Summer.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 11 years agowith ang and des
5ed of course
eol is counter-intuitive,
but as ang forces the key words
Angelineover 11 years agowith this short poem where no words are wasted and the composition forces a careful read that breaks on the two key words: Summer and Winter. Nice work. :-)
Desejoover 11 years agoThere is something about this that I really like. It is accessible without being obvious. The line breaks are really interesting and (for me at least) unexpected. The image of scrambling for a dime is a nice link back to the desperation of staving off winter, and burning a dime is an interesting twist of meaning.
