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sandyb
sandyb
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I want your love to leave its mark on me,
to swallow my selfishness and leave me blind.
I want it to smear my face
and spot my dress
and rearrange my self-esteem.
I want it so deep inside of me
that I feel it in my bones.
I want it to break me down
and leave me squirming in the dirt.
I want your love to hurt.

sandyb
sandyb
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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Bill's love did spot & smear Monica's dress

In the Oval Office , no less !!

tazz317tazz317about 11 years ago
THAT IS NOT HURTING

it spraying with jism. TK U MLJ LV NV

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
I think you could have begged with more passion, less words and

fewer cliches, but you do show some promise nonetheless. Do keep writing. Sweet O.