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Tanka #27

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Part 1 of the 4 part series

Tanka
Updated 09/21/2022
Created 01/27/2013
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In your autumn fields

We lay with abandon

Careless of the leaves

You raised clods of fecund earth

I sowed immortal seeds

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5 Comments
demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Good -

and a nice descriptive piece in so few words!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Perfect Tanka

Great form - well understated - nice - Sweet O.

DesejoDesejoabout 11 years ago
Liked this

Normally double spacing on poems is not something I like, but in this case it works, because it gives the reader time to absorb each line. Well done.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Really liked this one r j f

5 ed

ArjayEiffArjayEiffabout 11 years agoAuthor
31 Tanka

All 31 are free here: http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/ArjayEiff

I'll be posting them here over time

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