- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Healing Hearts
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Time heals all wounds... or so they say
If so then why do I still feel this way
Like an old building that people would plunder
So too my heart feels like it's been torn asunder
To love and be loved I dearly long
How could those feelings be so strong
To make me wonder by day and night
What it's like to awaken with someone at my side
But through my years of emotional pain
I have wondered if it would ever happen again
That I could find someone to share my love
But I would wonder if it would be enough
For I barely have a moments peace
From my heart which barely seem to cease
To make me remember those countless years
The years I spent the most of my tears
- COMMENTS
SweetOblivionabout 11 years agoAnd, alas, you lost any count after line 1 so your couplets became clogged and cumbersome.
It really is not how many words you can get into the line but how you express yourself that counts.
You have an idea for a verse. You might if you structure it properly and seek out something akin to an original idea have a poem. It is probably worth trying again.
I look forward to the results. S.O.
