- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Two Unrelated
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Kitchen Detente
Shifting alliances/appliances
Bitter enemies
Kettle and toaster
Blink
in the light of a new day
then sit down
to a jolly cup of tea
and scones
The Question
Sarah, sit here; say you love me
I'm empty and oh so blue
There's not a rhyme or phrase
left to save me but you
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 11 years agothere is play in the title, there is play in the juxtaposition, this seeming simplicity is much more complex, and in context this throwaway line "I'm empty and oh so blue", even shines, 5ed, you are hitting your stride.
PS I'm glad I waded through the chaff
Iread2relaxabout 11 years agoWay to go Harry. I almost missed this gem. So poignant, and full of feeling. Your #1 fan. Ir2r
Ashesh9about 11 years agoSworn enemies , Harry ?! A refreshin' look at the Kitchen ! Liked both the poems ---A-9
Angelineabout 11 years agotwo unrelated pieces. Kitchen Detente did not move me, whereas The Question I like very much. It's simple and easy and true. Poetry that has solid honesty without frills can be a very good thing imo. So it's a five but I'm only scoring on the second poem!
