First Time

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First time

We walked along a quiet wooded path
Until we found a spot
where other footsteps hadn't trod
Shedding our clothing like two innocent babes
We felt the gentle breeze
rustle through the most intimate areas of our bodies

Dropping to the forest floor,
we felt the soft green, lush beneath our backs.
Your milk-white thighs opened, beckoning
my fingers traced a previously undiscovered route
to the warm wet petals
Guarding your swelling, fragrant womanhood.
I tasted you gently, delicately
My tongue eagerly exploring your sweet depths.

Your searching fingers gripped my throbbing member
And slowly coaxed the purple - headed serpent from its lair.
And then the dance began in earnest
Our writhing bodies struggling to bond

Caressing, biting, stroking..
Husky voices, rich with desire
Moans of ecstatic pleasure
as pre-cum gently slid from deep within
Slipping all the bounds of its containment
Lubricating flesh in preparation
For soaring heights of pleasure yet to come.

I felt the warmth and comfort deep inside you
We moved in rhythm. getting ever closer
To the healing of the ache that shook us both
And then we came together breathlessly
Drowning clinging tightly to each other.
Aromatic juices now released
Slowly floating downward from the summit
Doubting that we'd ever feel again
That first initiation to adulthood,
A joy that I want never to forget.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"the gentle breeze "

is not enought

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago

Milk White thighs and aromatic juices aside this is a competent love poem, with good scansion; but you don't really say anything different. Try to refocus and make the experience special to you and consequently special to your readers. S.O.