- Non-Erotic Poetry
- In A Place Beyond
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In A Place Beyond
In a place beyond;
where fairies dwell.
Lies a sparkling pond,
where,sweet romance
and love are intertwined.
Flowing with a love so true;
of a type you rarely find.
The love that I now feel for you,
more than for all of human kind.
Love that forms a bond,
no earthly power can break.
Spellbound by love's magic wand;
my heart is yours to take.
For, my love that started as a pond;
you've made into a lake!
- COMMENTS
erectus123almost 11 years agowhere,sweet romance= no need for comma after where
human kind=humankind
use of semicolons is ok, but a comma might work as well, also you don't need periods to end a verse, as it is a poem. Just a suggestion; carry on as you wish.
