- Non-Erotic Poetry
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I'm not here she said
Promises made and broken
But all the better for me
I smiled
What's my name I asked her
She was wrong but I answered to it anyway
So I took hold of her hand
She hasn't let go
And neither have I
- COMMENTS
Desejoalmost 11 years agoYou effectively portrayed a story in these three stanzas, with just enough gaps to let the reader fill in the blanks. The poem could have stood on the first two stanzas.n The third one is fine, but "I took hold of her hand" skirts on cliche. The title looks like SMS-speak to me, and I'm not fluent in it so I have no idea what it means, but I'm intrigued enough to try and guess. Well done.
