- Non-Erotic Poetry
- People in Books
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I envy people in books.
Even uncertainties
are precise,
shaped by words
in black and white
Not so for me.
My thoughts, my words impure.
An animal caged by barriers unseen,
I remain confused, enraged, unclean.
- COMMENTS
Oldbear63over 10 years agoCleardaynow - I wish more folks would comment on their work - very interesting. I guess when we put stuff out there it becomes open to so many different perceptions - one of the things that make this so much fun.
todski28over 10 years agodon't both interpretations say almost the exact same thing :-p
I like this by the way 5-ed
Cleardaynowover 10 years agoAuthorI agree with Oldbear63’s interpretation rather than the interpretation in my own last comment.
I seem to have wandered off the actual poem into territory of my own – people commenting seem to do that a fair bit.
Tempted to delete my comment – certainly would like to change it. Think I had had a difficult day.
Tempted to say more. Am resisting that temptation.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoGreat Author aka as God !?! 5-ed .
Oldbear63over 10 years agowith my interpretation - that people in books are not beset by the complexity of real life, no matter how good the author. I'm going with that!
