Ant-Hill

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Ahhh yes,
      free form text          
unhinge the mind
let it roam        
where the will o'wisp takes it.

        floating  and dipping      
smelling and farting
        vagaries abound      
does the chance return?
      
Only when My will is strong.
        binding you to the posts,
       Watching and looking
      out the window,      
staked out in splendour       , akimbo.

How long the chastisement ?
longing for release,
      never getting any      
staying the course ,
    never finishing.


Rocks finish,
as do ants

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Intriguing

Free floating lines ~ stopping along the way ~ to pick up a metaphor.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A little free form association,

From floating to binding and being staked out;

The D/s vision goes on endlessly,

While the natural one views an end point.

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