All Comments on 'Trouble in Paradise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Grant Lee rocks

I love the way you write. It turns me on so. I love you. Love, Hayli

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Nice. Looking for the next chapter

mark919mark919over 10 years ago
Arousing!

Erotic. sensual and so arousing. Can't wait to read the next episode. I just love the idea of a defenceless young wife at the mercy of brutal men.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Utter filth!

Excellent! Loved it! 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This story has been a favorite if mine for almost twenty years... As has Mr. Lees work. Thank You

MarlaDMarlaDover 2 years ago

I love this story. One of my biggest fantasies

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very stupid of Brad to get caught with drugs in a foreign country.

He could have guessed that something like this would have bad consequences.

He can consider himself lucky that Jill is so vehemently committed to her husband.

It is also fortunate that you are dealing with an understanding police chief.

Jill just needed to press a little on the lacrimal glands and coquette a little to soften the police chief.

The police chief even goes so far as to take the frightened Jill in his arms and comfort her.

Jill gratefully returns his embrace and caresses.

Since the formalities for Brad's release will certainly take a few days, the police chief will certainly continue to take care of Jill.

I love stories in which everything turns for the better after the first horror.

Hiker66BikerHiker66Biker5 months ago

Pure filth! 4 stars.

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