by qdata
sorry for my english... but...
is...
pure love... and passion...
from a mother to a son...
very lovely...
thank you...
:)
<alessio>
Very well written had me reading more and more, I enjoyed every word of it, thanks.
I would like to see a bit more reluctance from the mom at the beginning, more build up of sexual tension between them more "innocent" events that turn the other one on that much more.
Please keep writing.
Loving mom
Oh What a beautiful story! I think the one thing that makes a great story is that you can imagine you are right there with the participants....I felt as though I were a voyeur and that to me made it so real....
Thankyou, you really know how to put a story together, I can't wait to read all your stories...Please keep up the good work....Thankyou once again
you never ate the potato skins!!!! Beautiful tale elegantly told. Thank you.
...luke warm...hope it gets better...needs several big black lovers...some sex with some horses...color...!!!
NOW WHAT ABOUT SARAH AND HER SON JOHN ? HOW WILL THEY FIT INTO THIS. WELL ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER, SEE YOU LATER........LAROC OF AGES
YOU LOST ME, WHO IS SARAH AND WHO IS WENDY.??? AND WHO DOES JOHN BELONG TO??? HELP ME PLEASE. ......................LAROC OF AGES
Gave me one of the best hard on's I've ever had. Wanked myself silly
it was pretty sexy. i gave it 5 stars - but occasionally the camera gets in the way of the action!
Good, logical progression of the story. Would like to see more character development and emotional growth.