All Comments on 'The Lesbian Boss'

Not too bad;I liked the concept of the story...but..there's no such thing as 'worser' or 'worsest'. It's 'worse' and 'worst'.

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did they stay a couple that came outest or was this a one time thinger

I loved the innocence of Melanie; she reminds me a bit of the character in 50 Shades.

I hope you will continue this tail..

Thanks

Wes

I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) I actually like the ending myself, maybe I will do a part 2.

This story was pretty good. I enjoyed it a lot! It escalated very very quickly and it made me giggle (in a good way). Keep up the good work.

Great story to fantasize about.

I love women who holds a strong authority job.

I enjoyed the story. It was fairly well written. One suggestion is you might want to be careful with your grammar. There is no such word as worser. The word is worse.

I'd say this one is too fast and too unbelievable. Big and scary boss should be scared shitless for chasing after straight secretary - one tiny mistake and rumors could bite her in the ass.

And the main heroine falls in love far too easy. Being gay is not a simple switch you could flip on a whim.

No matter how powerfull the boss-ladies are, love make them soft and fluffy and cautious. This work of fiction denies basic laws of nature.

Please buy a dictionary and thesaurus your story is ruined by shocking English. For example ... "worsest" ? There is no such word. This is only one example of bad word choice, shocking spelling and abysmal grammar. I suggest you find a reliable editor

i loved this

very good 👌

it takes initial mutual attraction to get into bed so quickly.

It went by too fast. Not enough detail

Dominant, predatory lesbian bosses are HOT, and I loved the way she took control of her pretty employee, although a little more seducing would have made it hotter still!

mmmffff yes thank you!! :) more labia-on-labia, i say. more!! haha

...worse, worser, worsesest. Hey, it workest for me! Get a sense of humor folks, It like you analmousies are terrified by humor.

Its a nice flow to it and i like where its going. keep it up please

This story opens with a beautifully painted picture...can it get any better?

I am in a love-hate relationship with this story. I love the premise of your writing, don't get me wrong, its a great plot. However, I found myself getting excited and then all of a sudden I'd stumble over a terrible grammatical error and it would ruin what I was feeling. To some people such as myself, intelligence is sexy. Also, pedophilia is not. So I felt very odd reading an adult story and coming upon a word like "worser" which made me think a child could have helped write this. I agree with the other comments about this problem. Its called 'spell check' honey, and your writing will benefit from it.

Like I said above. Horrible grammar. Respectable structure and a great premise.

This is one of my favorite stories!!! I've read this story at the least 3 maybe 4 times. And it has left me wishing that the writer would've done more than just the two chapters.

NEVERTHELESS it still deserves a 5🌟 rating and a dozen roses.

"There's thread count sheets ..."

Oooo, that's hot. Somebody counted those threads? Wow. Makes me wet.

as many have said, it’s very distracting that there are made up words. it also takes me out of it when it jumps back and forth between the past and present. t’s clear that the author wanted to write the story in one of those, but couldn’t decide which, so they didn’t.

very very good

This is an erotic story- I will read the part 2