All Comments on 'Kid Sister: Mother-In-law'

Little Sister and Mother-in-Law are Great Women to have in Reserve in case Your Wife is on Her Time-of-the-Month or She is Just Being a Bitch or one of Them is Needing Relief!

You have a true talent for the erotic!

The story is wonderful. The details are great keep writing.

I liked the plot, but I thought the characters were pretty two dimensional. They showed up, they fucked, they left - they could have been robots. Some character development would really help make this a five star - the sex was good, but in a story, as in life, it isn't enough by itself.

Thank you for all of your comments so far. In regard to the character development, I will try to get more in with the next story I write. I feel like I did most of the character development in the first story. Since this is a sequel, I spent a little less time rehashing those personalities. I can see the perspective though, and I will do what I can to improve that.

I am really enjoying this series! I just wish that Melissa wasn't so awful haha. Really hot.

loved that it was the mother-in-law with the foot action