All Comments on 'Life as a New Hire Ch. 34'

So much here: the death of Ajax at last (he really wasn't around as much as I thought he'd be), a new goddess creature, the new gypsy House.

Going to have to read this one a couple of times to properly assimilate it, but good work once again!

Just damn. All this stuff is happening. Can't even process. You're amazing.

i love it. Cael hitting on females of god like proportions. just needed aya in this to make it complete.wonder if she considers Cael's future children as siblings.

Great chapter as always.

Like always a great story !

Asshole's dead!

Thank you very much for sharing your talent!

Please do publish in ebook formats when finished.

Now I have to start counting the hours and minutes until Ch. 35.

Soon Please.

Man I was on edge on majority of this all... thank you and I can't wait till chapter 35.

One more goddess in the round. This story keeps getting morre interesting after each chapter..

One of, if not the best, chapter yet. Keep it up

Cliffhangers suck. As soon as the last word are read, you immediately want the next installment

There aught to be a health warning to this story,beware this is addictive

When it's later than usual to post a new chapter I find myself checking several times a day to see if it's been updated,

keep up the good work and I hope it does not finish for a good while to come

Masterpiece!

on all the chapters of this story, there are a couple at 4.90, and I expect this one to go higher.

Is there somewhere I can download every chapter from this story as a PDF file or something? It gets hard to re-read chapters when you're somewhere with crappy internet service.

with joejacks...this story is insanely addictive - 'nuff said!

Thank you, for both your epic adventure and your ever increasing skill and style. I am enjoying this wild ride!.

Title says it all.

I am uncertain of the exact topography, but the outlines strongly resemble your story to date. Everything seems random, but it follows an obvious (to someone other than myself) plan, and proceeds at its own inexorable pace.

What's not to love?

Mike

would love to have this story on dl so's i dont have to be connected to the internet to read it

Lord help you hang on to this muse until we can read about Pamela playing with the next generation of her family's babies lol. Thanks AND Cheers Mate!

This one had me sitting on the edge! I'm late for work because I had to read all 6 pages in one sitting! Thanks!

'Nuff said. Thank you for a hell of a roller coaster ride with this chapter. :-)

~rewski84

You are the BEST writer on this site as far as I am concerned..... WAY TO GO!!!! thank you for taking the time to add another chapter to this great story

Another awesome chapter!! I love this series!! Please keep this one going forever!!

This is getting better and better.

Can you clarify?

Long Answer: I often use multiple designations for a person - in this case a personal name and a proper, OKH name as it would be written in the Roles of Members of the Host. Iyrcea was his 'proper' name, while 'Bolu' was his 'given' name. As an example, there are no Hittite word for 'Buffy', 'Desiree', or 'Cael'. Vranus was the 'given' name of Cael's ancestor, not his OKH name (which I haven't created yet - I have to research this stuff from on-line Hittite sources). In life, Iyrcea would have answered to Bolu. In death, he would have been remembered as Iyrcea. Why would Shawnee refer to the Cael being of the line of Vranus to the Council? Because, officially, Vranus never died. Neither did Bolu. They all know that Vranus and Bolu are dead, but record keeping is record keeping and their deaths, like the Deaths of all of the Ash Men, were never written down. Krasimira would refer to Cael as Vranus' line because Cael was standing right there. It would have been an insult at that moment to automatically infer his ancestor was dead. She referred (off-screen) to Bolu as Iyrcea when taking to Cael about the issue because she considered Bolu (and maybe his line) to have died out and Cael was not of Iyrcea's line (no insult). The artifact Shawnee showed Cael at the Council meeting was created shortly after the Second Betrayal when it was assumed all five men/boys were still alive ~ again with the given name, not the proper name.

Short Answer: I screwed up. I couldn't find the 'Iyrcea' reference so I made up another name. The above information on naming is true, just never revealed before. Pamela and Katrina are 'given' names. Walking around the outside world with five and six syllable names would be suspicious. It should be noted that 'Runners' do not have OKH names as they are not on the Role of the Host. Buffy, Helena and the others will be assigned OKH names.

FS,

I guess that the dragon ladies are in for a somewhat rude awakening in the next chapter. SzélAnya does not recognise them. So who could they be? Cael will need to keep an eye on them. If they havent done something while Cael was saving the day. Again. Rachel will end up with ulcers. Buffy will blame her, you know it. Rikki is going to figure out a way to find out if Caels hype is a myth. Thank you for Ch. 34 but we need answers. Come on Ch.35!

If you keep them coming, I will keep enjoying them. Thanks for your time and effort.

Definitely a stand-out chapter. The battle scene was a little hard to picture, but it was a lot of fun. Ajax was an interesting character; sad to see him go!

There will be tears and sadness on Ch35.

Sorry it took so long this time. My editors and gang got me Chapter 35 two days ago and it took me a while to get off my ass, do the final edit and submit it. I've been dealing with some stuff. I've kept working away at the story. Chapter 36 is up to 6,362 and growing.

Great as always. Once again, I urge you to consider turning this into a TV series.

1. a good general plans strategics but a great general plans logistics.

2. good research done there I admire it. But you need to go into slavic heritage and the migration with evolution of sanskrit language that formed the basis for most of the european and other lingos.

3. There are a few original written languages and their scripts. That would provide an insight to the development of human culture. Off hand i can tell you the Runes, Sanskrit, Tamil and many of those bastardized scripts. Itsvery intersting to see what history says and what happened!

That moment when you're enjoying a good story and then you remember all good stories have to come to an end.

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absolutely fantastic battle scene

Made me think of “Red Star Rising “. In my opinion ,Tom Clancy’s, best book. There was so much going on , spread over a wide theater. Nice work!

Thank you very, very much! Clancy is one of my favorite authors and if I even held up a literary candle to his brilliance ... it makes me feel good.

Again, thank you and take care,

James aka FinalStand

Reminds me more of Harold Coyle’s Team Yankee rather than Tom Clancy’s book..

but not by much. Loved the chapter, well done!

James

Yes this is a superb story, with very strong links to Tom Clancy and a lot of ancient research. I look forward to the next new female characters as Cael demonstrates a degree of the best of literotica sexual prowess.

Thanks for this two days so far and shoulder cramps (due to page turning).

I was going to wait till I finished the series to comment but, wow,just wow!

I almost understood this chapter. A question. Do you have a master plan for this or are you making it up as fast as you make up your professions.

... it is a bit of both. Part of it I make up as I go along and part of its is some Master Plan I occasionally deviate from. It is my writing style and something I've become comfortable with as the 'Master Plan' bit comes from feedback from so many of the readers here. For instance, I knew there was going to be a showdown with Ajax, but it ended up in Romania because of two readers who suggested it to me - one being a Romanian ex-SF guy whose input I really appreciated, and the other being a long time supporter who has has about as much input into this story's direction as myself (ty FF).

I wish I could tell you I follow some well thought out Grand Plan, but I don't. I still hope it has been an interesting journey.

Take care and thank you for your feedback,

James aka FinalStand

Fu k you. He facing some crazy ghost thing and gives up all thought of it because odette wants to kiss. In what world would he even turn away from the monster? You have a hell of an imagination but some real actions make it smoother.

The ghost thing that just doesn’t matter any more because odette wants a fucking kiss and he just has be nice and give her whatever the fuck she wants is so much damn bullshit I can’t fucking stand it. You have points in the story where I’ve thought why or this is getting boring. You haven’t had anything that pisses me off but that does it. This ghost deal is in the room with them but let’s forget about it. Even though it spies let’s just worry about teen being idiot

2reader, would you stop being an asshole about your personal nitpicking, it’s a story (and a bloody great one at that), you didn’t put in the effort to write it, proof read it or anything like that. If you have criticism’s at least have the decency to be polite about it.

-Minti

2reader is a rotten count.