All Comments on 'Hot Days and Hotter Nights Ch. 04'

This is definitely my favourite story of the ones you have been writing. Cannot wait for more!

Seems like there was a lot of magical energy flowing around on that mountaintop. If not everyone knows of Salamacia's dragon, what will people think when Sena turns up preggers? Even the hint of scandal would likely mortify your young bride...

Just musings. Please do continue this fascinating and intricate tale.

this story get me hooked .waiting for more.

Since one is fire magician other water I was expecting some friendly fight between them, plus increase in level.

but whatever continue the story.

It would be interesting to read how Sena would react to one of Salamacia's old lovers. Would she become jealous? What would Salamacia's old flames think of Sena?

I absolutely love this story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work because it's absolutely awesome.

Keep going!I haven't been this interested in a story in a long time!!!

I've been loving this story so far! Keep up the good work!

This story just gets me all excited. I can't wait for more.

I like how this is progressing. Its very well writen so far, but i do have one thought. You keep bringing up magic but never use it for more than a quick jolt during sex. I'd like some wider uses of magic if possible.

Please sir I'd like some more!