All Comments on 'Hypnosis Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Real Good Start

Can't wait to see where this goes. If he develops his "talent" they could have one hell of a interesting party with a few other couples to control.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
rare

Good MC, without - or maybe with, that's the key - a descent into utter perdition. And the writing doesn't get in the way of the tale. I look forward to where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice

This has promise. Well written and i can't wait for the next chapter. I just hope that he learns how to control his power, wouldn't want him to be completely controlled by her forever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

Haven't read a story like this in a while. Great storyline with much appeal. You also opened this up for lots of future possibilities. 4 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
best i've read in a while

hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5/5

Pls. Write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Waiting...

Have been really keen to see a second installment from this exhilarating start

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Kept me reading till the end

Good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was very,very awesome, please, keep up your great writing, please

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