All Comments on 'Three in a Tub'

HOT HOT HOT

Nice job. Every man's dream come true. Can I be invited to your next pool party?

Glad to see you've dipped your toe in the water here at Literotica. Much more to cum I hope.

Realism makes such a wonderful difference. Thank you.

And believable, too, after a fashion. The first sentence starts with a glaring grammar error which was off putting. But overall, a nice first effort.

And I have just spotted the grammar problem in the 1st para - How the hell did I miss that!

Please, you start out with "Me and my wife" which should be, "My wife and I". I haven't read further. you need an editor and advisor. Please find one and do a rewrite. Then I might pursue an interesting concept.

Very hot, continue on.

Don't listen to the haters, big deal your grammar isn't perfect. Its a sex story not a thesis. I enjoyed it.

I enjoyed it, and as a non-english person, the grammar didn't bother me at al ;)

We both very much enjoyed this story and congratulate you on a good first effort. We've had some similar fun in our hot tub over the years and this story brought back memories. We wish we'd been there in the steamy bubbles with the three of you! Please post some more stories here.

Had a very similar experience with my wife and her very drunk friend. I came so fast it was scary. At least the first time. The girls barely noticed. Two women together is hot!!