All Comments on 'The Dinner Party Ch. 01'

... to read the work of a new author, particularly when they write as well as you do, LadyAmaranth. A fine start -- I look forward to reading more, very soon. Welcome to Literotica; I hope you will write lots for us. Five stars.

looking forward to the next part

like the other comment, I too am looking forward to the next installment.

The ingenue, the domly dom, the big house, the club of kinksters, the trouble maker (two, actually), spoonfuls of hidden desire and a full package of unread contract. Knead and let rise. Next chapter...into the heat of the oven.

You have me anticipating something tasty.

Well done am looking forward to the next chapter

Excellent. I am looking forward to reading more of this story and any others you might have in mind.

I am NOT a nitpicker, but I did notice one typo while reading: no vs know. So this is meant as just a friendly FYI:

"It says Winston, which will inform everyone that that is your safe word. If you say it, they will no to stop immediately."

Looking forward to more Chapters.

Keep it going, maintain the standard and spice it up a bit. Don't skip over the sex, make it as descriptive a you can.

Looking forward to the next instalment.