All Comments on 'Will You Love Me 'Til I Die? Ch. 04'

This series is so warm and romantic! You keep surprising with each new twist and it keeps getting better and better. Cannot wait till the next chapter and the deepening love for all of the women in Carl's life.

A pleasured bit of passion and love

Soft..just like the wings of a dove

So sublime...so sweet...so elegant all

Imaginings...to be the belle of this ball!

I love how you are developing the characters and how their love is growing and the sex scenes are very well done (i.e you are keeping me hard!). While I am scoring these stories with 5s, I do have one negative comment. The dialogue drips with way too much saccharine-induced adjectives and turns of phrase. Believe it does take away with some of the romanticism you are working at.

I very much like your stories. Keep it up.