All Comments on 'Nine Holes of Golf'

by charles_dickings

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Golfing

Sounds to me like you had nine holes in ones! Time for the back nine?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too unattractive

Sorry, but I stopped reading when you talked about how downright ugly your wife was. Not every story needs to have a porn-star perfect female in it, but I might have kept going if you'd described her as "plump and on the plain side," or something similar.

edgeofvampedgeofvampover 9 years ago
Explorative risk

Admittedly I was a bit put off by your description of your wife, but in the end I think you found an even more appreciative view of your wife.

You also seem to find a new way for your wife and yourself to enjoy one another in the throes of passion.

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