All Comments on 'A Summer of Slow Transition Ch. 02'

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1jbm1jbmover 9 years ago
Hot story

I have now read both stories and look forward to new, future updates.

As a dirty old man, I am very much turned on by these stories

and am typing this with a hard cock and hunger for more.

Thanks

Joe

gapster7gapster7over 9 years ago
Great second chapter..

You're teasing the reader well. Keep them coming - literally and figuratively!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Don't stop now. It's time to plant flowers and go fishing.

more, soon, please

oldpupoldpupover 9 years ago
More soon....Please!

I have to let go of "myself" to get both hands on the keyboard. As an old man with a boat I would love for you and Charlie to "get together" on a boating event.....

PervertedKnightPervertedKnightover 1 year ago

Wow, you were a magnificent writer! It's a shame that you no longer write, but I'm happy that I stumbled across your tale. The wife sounds very much like my ex, and the pillow talk sounds conversations that my ex and I had after our honeymoon, when I discovered that she liked older men. I wish I had been able to get her to dress like your heroine and tease the older men in our apartment complex. 5 stars from me! Cheers!

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