All Comments on 'The Black Knight'

OhBabyBaby, you get a 5* for this beautiful one pager. Your tale was so perfect, complete, Hot, & the perfect length. I will be back for more of your storys. I know they will be as Hot as this one. These 2, need to met again@ her place & fuck all night. Thanks for a great read.

Well written, and as the OP said, a good one-pager. Length doesn't always count for something. Well, in written stories, anyways. ;-)

I look forward to more submissions. Please keep writing!

I liked the nice comfortable style, and I like a quick in and out, so to speak.