All Comments on 'Helen's Garden of Delights'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Sounds like a scene in "The Fermata" by Baker.

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 9 years agoAuthor
the Fermata

I don't know that one, will check it out - some of the reviews sound intriguing.

Thanks for that

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

A story within a story within a story? Interesting to say the least. When Debby was taking her shit, it was almost like she was birthing it. Pushing the head out, then letting it back in and pushing it out again. The similarity to giving birth was only deepened when Helen caught the turd, oh so carefully, with a cloth cupped in her hand. Almost thought they should have named it. Never cared for scat stories, but pissing is still a turn on. A very strange story, but thanks

cmj711cmj71112 months ago

I agree with oldpantythief, shitting is as close to birthing as it gets, especially if you've been constipated.

The relief... to finally expel, can be orgasmic ;)

Pee play can be delightful, a new kink for me.

I love the expression & description 'smiling eyes' that's perfect for an orgasm.

Not exactly breadcrumbs.... ;) xox 💋

RangeExpanderRangeExpander12 months ago

When I first read this some years ago, it seemed a bit too far-out for me. I mean I love anal sex, both giving and receiving, but shitting? I thought not. However I re-read the story last night and was overcome with a wonderful full-body orgasm. I think you do a great job of evoking the primal nature of sexuality, its connection to earth and all things basic. And that is hot enough for me whether or not I actually want to play with shit.

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