All Comments on 'Becca Takes A Large Deposit Ch.01'

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needingsomeloveneedingsomeloveover 9 years ago
please continue

Great start to the story. Looking forward to what happens downstairs. Also looking forward to a potential 3 some with the bank manager as well.

kjanekjaneover 9 years ago
Looking forward to more!

You did a nice job building the flirtatious chemistry between Connor and Becca.

5 stars for the title of the story alone, lol. I can't wait to see which slit takes the deposit!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
sexual tension

Like the beginning and how the tension is rising amongst other things.

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