All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 9 years ago
Very nice too!

er -- you couldn't PM me the details of this hotel, I suppose? Great stuff, well done -- five stars a huge TY and Xmas hugs.

ThomasLordThomasLordabout 9 years ago
A Good One

I really liked this story. Creative and hot fantasy. It isn't quite complete enough to give it 5 stars but I'd give it 4 1/2 if I could. Add a little background on the main character, clean up some editing and you're there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
It's ok...

Everything Is great but some of the stuff like blindfolded is not ok

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
so much for

honouring her wishes and boundaries.

Humpdee84Humpdee84about 9 years ago
Yummy

All the aspects are there. Very nicely held my attention right to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please!

Kinky as heck! I like this fantasy very much!

playman64playman64about 9 years ago
Excellent

Rhonda,

That was very smoking HOT.

Very good, really enjoyed masturbating to it.

Very GOOD !

Hipshot1554Hipshot1554almost 6 years ago
This story is very erotic...

I liked the premise a lot. Stories about new sexual experiences that change the way a woman feels are some of my favorites. Keep it up, Roy

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