All Comments on 'Psyche's Surprise'

Incredible good writing there. 5* well deserved.

can not wait to read more

I gave your story a 5 because I couldn't give it a 12!

One of the very best ever.

More please.

One of the best I've read. Hands down. More please!

Incredibly erotic and very well written. It's a 5 all the way.

One of the best stories on the site. Definite top 3

Amazing, awesome , superb........the best i have ever read.....wow

That was so good I wanted more. Then when it ended with a personal note it made it even more erotic. Instant Fan.

That was, imo, extremely well written erotica. I did however wait till the end to check out the profile, not sure whether it was a male or female writing. Near the end I felt it was probably a bloke but hoped it was a woman.

Definitely five star story. Now added you to bookmark and will check out more of your contributions, after i get my breathe back and work the cramp from my hand. lol

thanks

The best I've ever read on here. Hands on.

and will keep doing it!

Echoing what others have said...by far the best I've read. Thanks for sharing!

Very well written. This is the best anal story ive read so far hands down. Well deserved first place

Short of words.. I think my comment title says it all

Suzie should totally forgive you after reading this

your story is absolutely amazing. loved it. great build-up, interesting characters, nice frame story, mixture of dominance and caring, freaking awesome. super hot. thank you!!

Well written. I loved this story. Beautifully told

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Absolutely the best story I've read here. Your personal ending statement was a beautiful touch.

so torching storry. she should forgive you for u have genuine love for her ass

This is a terrific story. Nivia is a lucky lady!

I very much enjoyed this story! The second time even more than the first. Very well done.

The best read yet! Outstanding

Very well written. I was impressed that you didn't have to just give us what the characters looked like, what race they were or much of a description. You managed to paint all of that with the story itself which is the mark of an exceptional writer. Loved this.

P.S.

So, 6" is big for a black man?.. Cause I was under the impression they were larger than me... ;)

I was hard the entire story after the first encounter in the closet. I didn't know what I wanted to have more of, akai's hard cock or nivia's dripping pussy or hot asshole. Maybe licking his cock and sucking his balls as he reamed her cunt and asshole. Sucking their juices from both her holes with precum leaking from my throbbing engorged cock.

Except for the fact that she was married, I loved their (your) story. I hope you get the opportunity to let her know how you feel and that she forgives you in the way you described. Wonderfully written, full of love as well as lust!

JJ

Great, just great. The attention to detail and dirty detail at that, was fantastic!

Fabulous story. My husband came into the bedroom as I was reading this story while masturbating. When he saw how wet I was he took over and started eating me out. I continued reading the story out loud while he banged my pussy and then he slipped his cockhead into my puckered hole. He then delighted me by putting my rabbit vibrator into my pussy and placed the clit massager under my clitoral hood. My orgasm was out of this world and I squirted my juice everywhere just as I felt my man fill me up with his cum. When he pulled out all rhe air he'd pumped into me came out in a big fart which had him hard and raring to go again!!

This had me playing in no time! It's rare that I do much beyond rubbing through my clothes while reading stories and yet this had me sliding fingers under silk, into wetness and soon after ramming a toy again and again until I exploded when Nivia did on the balcony!!

You have an exceptional insight into the way a woman thinks (at least this woman!). All woman deserve to have the inner slut drawn out and released the way Akai did for Nivia!

5000 stars!!!

You are one of the best!!!

Wonderful Story! All your stories are in-depth and.......please feed our hunger with more and more

Engaging, inventive and entertaining!! Thank you!

Thank you for wrapping an enjoyable story around some really hot sex.

Goddamn....Suzie needs to get ahold of you bruh

Beautiful story. Being an ass man, this hit home. Would love for a virile man to take my wife like this.

Great combination of kinkiness and passion. When Nivia was on the balcony getting her large derrière licked, and she made eye contact with her little elderly neighbor, I almost lost it! So hot!

Tears and wetness came out of this story❤️

Oh WOW

Excuse me but this was the best erotica Ive read in forever!! Yes to anal, yes to emotions, yes to all of it!

Fucking unbelievable! My favourite story here yet!

To my "Holy God" anonymous email feedback sender of 11/30/18, I surely appreciate every word you wrote. Thank you for reading my work and I'm glad you were touched by this story. I wish you hadn't written to me anonymously so I could thank you personally, but this will have to suffice.

Out of 10 this story rates a straight 20 fuck so so hot could do with some illustrations too 3d

I have never commented on any sort of porn or erotic writing, but my god, this definitely deserves it. The way you portrayed the story and colloquials used made me really feel this experience. Beautiful. Bravo!!!

I enjoyed the story so much.....but what got me emotional was your note at the bottom that you wrote this for a real live girl. She must have a magnificent ass! Thank you so much for the great story!!

So good! More!

Love this story! Made me feel as if I was there. Want more for sure!

I can't get this story out of my mind. It's probably due to the fact I can relate with Kai in a lot of ways. I'm not a reader and I couldn't stop reading with this one. Thank you and please continue writing stories of this nature.

What a great story. The act of sticking a tongue up a woman's ass is as close to her as one can possibly be. One now knows her better than most or all than ever before. A bond tied to so many emotions and realizations that the proof is in the feelings from memories playing over and over again in our heads. One step closer to the bond that the real excitement is in the 'Trust'!. Once Again...a great story.

I read this lime 3 times over the years. Best story I read, very real and reminds me of some of my own exploits. This story is probably real

I loved this story, so very good. The images it created in my mind were amazing. And there was only one person I thought of whilst reading this.

Good flow to the story, and very descriptive. Well-written. Maybe too well-written.

So, the wife takes a dump on a good husband and kids to take it up the ass from their mutual friend? With a friend like that, who needs enemies?

Besides, if Nivia wasn't such a prude and communicated with Drew, maybe she would have been pleasantly surprised.

Omg, I RARELY can cum from solo play but this story took me so far over that cliff!!! As I end my night with this fresh in my mind and knowing the guy I want is going to be at my house first thing in the morning I better have some sexy dreams

Good premise.

Lots of sex. But the sex seems to get lost in all the excess verbiage.

Four stars.

Well done sir

Very realistic and an excellent balance between thoughts and feelings on one hand, and physical action on the other. Great for understanding the "back story."

Holy smokes. Hottest anal sex story ever. It was almost as good as being there .

Erotic novels...you must!

Very long winded. I guess probably just an attempt to throw so many words at the issue to try to justify or excuse another selfish, arrogant, cheating female running around after other dogs.

Best story I've read here ever. Thank you so much!