All Comments on 'The Lindy Series Ep. 01: Lindy Grows Up'

Not exactly my fetish but I like reading stories where the characters aren't the typical knockouts but are more like people you see everyday, which I find erotic. Imperfection can be quite appealing and far more realistic.

@VeryDirtyMind: I appreciate your comment very much. I really don't care for extreme fantasy and tend to write from a "human" perspective. There are some "superhuman" feats in what I write, but I keep them limited so as not to ruin the overall flavor of the story being told.

Thanks for sharing this. I think it is an excellent story a day I loved it.

The sexy writing about the pee is well handled. The story could do with a light edit, there are a couple of anomalies. This is a great fetish stroke story, though.

LOL, Helen sure ought to think about some boundaries! I guess the little whiff of incest does ratchet up the excitement.

Lindy's innocence and Helen's willingness to shelter her from the wicked world is something I can relate to. I can also relate to Helen in other ways... /blush. I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters!

All that just for a couple paragraphs about pissing? I read all the way to the end because it is labeled as "hot", but the only heat is if it were put to the torch. Boring.