All Comments on 'Just Desserts'

that's all?

I was convinced the story was going one way and then the twist. Very well written with an economy of style that was very appealing. Hot sex to boot!

You don't disapoint.

Loving wife account very delightful of a better day. Young and young at heart in loving relationships can relate to this erotic interlude with overidentification and yearning. Before the kids, the end of a workday can be quite an adventure. This story exemplifies the tone set and the plush atmosphere of bliss in the slow lane of easy marriage loving. Bravo!

for a flash story.

and why this category?

What lovely sweet.

When was in the RAF one of my mates was just about to get married and he asked me if I had any suggestions I jokingly said put a protective sheet on the bed get some treacle or runny honey drizzle over your her then lick off starting with her breasts. I don't know if he did because I was demobbed whilst he was on their honeymoon.

Enjoyable little quickie