by LitRiter
it was one of the best sgtories i've read in a long time!!! it gave me such a hard-on i had to go "FUCK" my girl-fiend!! well done!!!
this story was hott and the fact that they hadnt been together. now where any of them virgins?that be so sweet
Whoo! That was certainly an inspiring read. Really nice and very steamy but still a lot of fun, too. I like that it was a quick read since it's sometimes hard to find time to sit down and read a full blown story. But, at the same time, you got quite a bit of story written into this short. These lines made me giggle: --She felt like a stuck pig, and while she could feel her own vagina working against her, grabbing and pulling on his dick, all Linda wanted was this thing out of her.-- and
--Then a stream of invectives, cursing like neither of them had ever heard before in one place or from one person (even on cable TV!), began to pour from Linda’s perfect little mouth.-- I thought this was wonderful. I like how freaked out she was at first, but as she wiggled around while trying to get off him, she, er, got off. haha Loved it! Now if I could just find someone to take *me* on a road trip... sigh.
Drive all day, drive all night; doesn't matter if it's real tight. Drive you here, drive you there; on your knees or legs in the air; driving alone wouldn't be fair; drive you in my rockin' chair.