by LadyJane
Though your words may be somewhat lost here... Those of us that believe in Love, Romance, and appreciate a "WordSmith" that has ability SHALL become enveloped in your Style!! SOME of us MIGHT just enjoy something unlike the "Poodle on a Preacher's Leg" that prevails hereabouts!!! Keep it up Lady,,, you ARE good!!!
I'm reading Neil Stepehenson's Quicksilver where the characters are involved. This is a superb piece of literature and I'm truly impressed.
Thanks
Loved it. Very good pacing, good characterization, good dialogue. My one suggestion (if concrit is accepted) would be this: the heroine doesn't seem to get all that spazzed out about anything happening to her after she's shaved. Holding come in her mouth, being anally violated, I'd think these would make more of an impact emotionally on a virgin than they seem to make here. But those are little things in a story that was very well-written.
Seldom is romance mixed with BDSM. This author did it in this story and carried it off very well. I think many women who would never admit it secretly wish to be sexually plundered.
Well done!
Nookiehunter
I read this story and loved it. I felt transported for a little while away from this world to another. Thank you for a lovely story.
I hope they have future meetings.....they both need to fall for the others needs and desires.
I think I would’ve smacked Molly the bitch really hard across the face, repeatedly after all a Lady of breeding might not know how to throw a punch.