All Comments on 'Blind Date'

This story wasn't rated hot on the Literotica scale, but I found it quite stimulating. It isn't super-hot, but definitely hot, and it left me with a swelling that'll take a while to go down - unless I take things in hand.

good but could have been better if you had continued the story and let us know how things go for them in the next few years

This is the kind of story that just does it for me. I'm all for good sex, happy pepole,and happy endings. As far as I;m concerned,you do not need forced sex, violance, or any of the other shit that is in alot of the stories on this sight.

I did enjoy it. But the way her brother was mentioned... 3 years away, age 20, Len....gave it away. A polite suggestion....there is mystery when masked, her brother's info should have been revealed after the copulation, and before recognizing each other.

Thanks Don

This was kind of a quiet story. In spite of her interests, it lacked an intensity. Did seem that the mystery could have been extended somewhat. As one of the other commented, you gave away too much in the beginning. I will be reading some of your other work though

Loved it but it was to short. You could have extended by two or three more chapter easily and made it into a truly great story....5 stars anyway....

Great story, well written but too short. 5/5

A short fun read.

Bill S.

The only quibble is his age, being a mere 20 and having been a commissioned officer. I don't know about the UK, but at a minimum, he would have to be 22 in the US Army because rank requires a bachelor's degree or its equivalent, i.e., four years from age 18.

Otherwise, fun read.

Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainte'