All Comments on 'The Long Goodbye'

There could be a few things to point out regarding grammar, misplaced text, etc, but you nailed the subject right out of the park. Now the tears won't allow me to write very much! Very nice job.

Great/sad story? Hit a little to close to home as i lost my mom to cancer though i can certainly say i did not have that kind of relationship with her.

But it's hard to get turned on knowing the person is dying from cancer. ***

... shame about the dreadful writing!!

Did you do English at school?

I fail to see how sex with a dying woman can be considered erotic. This is just wierd.

I hope that Part 2 has Sonny Boy fucking his Mom's old crinkly asshole while she lays in the Mortuary! There is nothing better that the stink of a dead person's shit on your cock.

never given 5* for a 1 pg story , but today I just did. dont care about all the mistakes. thats for others that know it all / me, im just trying to type thru pain and disabled hands to say I liked the story that you told. TY for giving me a good read this afternoon/ bill

Shit happens, and then you die. But the mother and son in this fine story make the most of it anyway. I don't understand the savagely negative comments. Here the couple grabs what pleasure they can before the inevitable end. The boy enjoys what lots and lots of sons can only whack off dreaming about. He fucks his own mother. He actually sticks his young cock up the same warm wet hole he came out of and blows his balls up his own mother's cunt. Over and over again. And in the process, he gives his mom the best cums of her life. You have to be a cold-hearted prick to begrudge them their joy.

Story, what son would not give his dieing mother anything to make her last days as happy as could be?

Omg i almost cried over this. Death has ripped our lives apart this year. Thank you

I wish people would talk about something other than grammatical mistakes. The story was about love, pure and simple. The son giving his dying mother one last chance at happiness. For those who have never known or seen anyone dying of cancer, it is not uncommon that one of the last things they want before their bodies give out on them is sex. Its something that makes the body feel good, even for a short period of time. Him giving that to her was because he loved her. And she loved him even more because of it, dying probably happier than she had been most of her life.

I came to this site to read erotic sex stories not to cry my eyes out. Well done!