All Comments on 'He Wasn't What She Seemed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Poorly written

For instance:

"I was footloose and fiancé‚ free"

Da fuck?

Not worth the time.

snowseed2016snowseed2016over 7 years ago
i want this !!!

loved your story, very well written, very erotic. i would love to experience that !!!

rudilrudilabout 3 years ago
love it, too

Would love to be doing this with Snowseed, too. Agree that this is very good story, and well-presented.

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