All Comments on 'Sex Toy'

pleeeease you have to write the next chapter soon , i love it .

Wonderful story. What a beautiful feeling having a cute big dick guy take control of you while you're being as girly and feminine as possible.

Great descriptions and realistic situation. Quite a few "straight" guys have indulged in m/m. It can be very satisfying.

I'm glad that you went straight to hot gay sex, with only the necessary amount of buildup. The story shows that good porn can still be literate and well-written.

I'm working on part two...

if he's having sex with a guy....he is not straight. Just needs to dump the chick and embrace his gay side. Gay men dream of turning straights all the time. Cute

Good job. Got me hard and stroking.

This is amazing!! I loved it. Keep this up. You should totally write a sequel or a spin off or something. It is really hot! 10/10

So...i enjoyed it dont get me wrong, but the dialogue betweenthe two seems a bit akward in the wrong kind of way. Like it sounds like a gay guy imagining two straight guys to talk. "Whats up dude?" "Oh nothin bro". Also the emphasis on sexual description and lack of character description kinda bugs me, like im just imagining two generic "femboy" "hung jock" characters. I know this is just pure fluff but not having any character progression snags on what actual porn can ignore. Lack of story. This is in word format so not having someting to engage you while you jack it is a bit of a turn off. It'd be like just writing "and then he put his penis in and they did the sex" of course im being facetious but its still the same idea. With normal porn its the images that capture the viewers intrest but with a word format you as the author must help engage as well as provide the original purpose which in this case is to provide a nice wank, all in all work on your characters a bit, give them personalities and structure as well as detailed sexual bodies. If you get my meaning.

epic

soooooooo sexy and nasty love big juicy cocks evertime i suck one i submit to that cock like a girly whore i kiss and make love to that cock until it tells me it loves me back by spraying my face with delicious cum,i get so horny i just give up my wrecked sissy ass,that why im taking hormones so i can get big tits and be more girly mmmm im suck a dirty cock sucking whore and i love it

Now, wouldn't that be a wonderful way to rediscover your friendship with a longtime friend?

I'm not into pain or cocks that are so thick that they hurt, but I do love a long one! Sometimes it's a little delicate, if he is long enough to go past the crook at the top of my rectum, but once he is in and I can sit on and just grind and feel it stirring around deep in my belly it's pure pleasure!

Very nice story! Very, indeed. I felt it somewhere. :)

Soooo good, the story should continue, they should hangout very often for some goodtime together.

Jon should make his friend a fuck doll for him.

Need a series of this, with more sex, more facial, and add crossdressing

Great story I loved it but the older I get the harder it to find me a master

super cute and fun