All Comments on 'Poolside'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
weres the sequel?

Weres the sequel?

i was just about to blow my load and all the sudden it ends? Weres the sequel?

Otherwise a very descriptive and sensual story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More!!

I need more of this. Hot but needs a better ending!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
that it?

I was expecting more than that. It was getting exciting than all of a sudden it endded you should definatly write more about this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
what

thats it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
more?

finish it!!

AngeldixieAngeldixiealmost 17 years ago
.........

ohh that was just mean

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
*************

Treat them mean, keep them keen, We'll be back for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
turkey

yet another turkey writer that leaves the readers hanging

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fucking rubbish

Crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
another waste of time

poor background and character development and no end equals a waste of time that NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ignore that idiot I want a sequel

Good stuff plz continue it left me hard

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