All Comments on '48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 04: Autumn'

by Carole99

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Then the panties reached her gag reflex spot

She vomited and with no where to go she drowned in her own vomit. End to dumb story. Why do people never think things through?

Carole99Carole99about 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your comment...

Anon,

I hadn't really thought of that angle. The panties weren't strapped in or anything. I guess the old adage applies: Don't try this at home! ;-)

josephstevensjosephstevensabout 9 years ago
Lovely..

Great story and breathtakingly erotic. We are all different as you know...and this genre floats my boat. Brilliant...thank you.

oh and well written, too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wow

nice and very well written!!!

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