All Comments on 'The Domme (Need for Submission)'

by Wants2benaughty

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
He'll never go back

Discovering the fact that he had both pride and self respect he never called the silly, manipulative bitch again. Who would? Actions without rhyme of reason. You thought that was interesting? BAH!

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyabout 9 years agoAuthor
thank you for your comment

Although I think you may have missed a big point. It was not a he.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very Nice Tale

Very erotic. A new slave's experience with her Mistress. A nice blend of pain and pleasure. Arousal and denial. The new slave will be back. Begging as her Mistress demands.

I hope we get to read of her next experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
HOT

This was a real turned on... please add more chapters of this Domme/sub story, or maybe other Domme/sub stories

visioneervisioneeralmost 7 years ago

Good, imaginative story. "Reward" slave and "suffering" slave are excellent ideas, and the way you use them to keep distance between the Mistress and the narrator is both frustrating and exciting.

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

For enjoying my story ;)

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