All Comments on 'The Trouble with Moonlighting'

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mcollectmcollectabout 9 years ago
Great writing

Of course it had to turn out that way.

hplitprincehplitprinceabout 9 years ago
Great idea!

Well developed idea! Great job, please write the next chapter soon!

NYCSeparatedWM50NYCSeparatedWM50about 9 years ago
Don't stop!

Really enjoyed this - looking forward to your next work.

Just_John1Just_John1about 9 years ago
Grrrrrrr!

So sudden! I did really enjoy the read. I really liked the character development and I'm interested to find out why Howard is so haggard... Wasn't ready for the sudden stop. Almost seems like you got caught writing and had to stop. Keep writing please! Thanks for sharing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
amazing

I love it. Now im not sure if you are finished with it but if you arent i will keep checking for updates.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Can't wait for more!!!!

I'm in love with this story. Please Update soon. Really waiting for the next chapter!!

OnenonelessOnenonelessover 8 years ago
Excellent setup

But it ends when the potential is greatest - more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
more please!

Loved it and really hope you write more to this one day!! The back room scenes and her fantasies were soo hot! Can't wait for more and to see how you would take their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

Thank you.

I read this with a vibrator on random mode and a cup of tea.

Absolutely delicious

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