All Comments on 'Miko'

by cherrychocolate

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very nice writing

And genuinely erotic. Well done.

hplitprincehplitprinceabout 9 years ago
Very hot!!

I totally should have been a masseusse...

trixieluv69trixieluv69about 9 years ago
loved this

hot! loved the flow....felt like I was on that beach with Miko

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
need a massage

Thank you for sharing very sensual. I happy but would like a massage like that ....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved the story

You write so well giving a vivid picture with your words I felt like I was on this vacation experiencing what the narrator went through. Loved it.

NateBiDudeNateBiDudeabout 9 years ago
SO erotic

Made me want to be Miko.

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Great Piece Of Erotic Writing.*****

As you closed your story with them smiling at each other. There is a lot of smiling going on by those of us who have just read your story. Thanks for sharing.

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