All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 17'

So glad you wrote this chapter!

Love how assertive Ron is becoming. And the escalating tension between Ron and Pam is really unparalleled in anything I've ever read. This series is truly a masterpiece.

Really dig the way the story is going. I got scared when you glossed over what happened in the massage rooms at first, but you totally made it pay off by the end--well done.You've had me hooked for years now , and am def still hooked.Hope future chapters go smoother for you. I'm sure 99 percent of the comments and mail you get are positive, but just in case, it is a FACT that this is the best story on this website. I have been hitting refresh on this damn thing for YEARS waiting for updates, and I've never seen anything else on here that comes even sorta close to making me do that.Keep doing whatever you're doing, because it rules

This chapter is incredible! Probably my fav apart from the shower one with Sue. Love the way the story is going, the seeds planted in the chapter are very intriguing, and I can't wait to see where they go, hope the next chapter comes pretty quickly! Hope the arrival of Nancy is not the last we hear of her too... Keep up the amazing work Jack!

Have to say first off I have loved everything so far. Like others have been impatiently waiting for years. But, was disappointed about the store cupboard scene, what about them being forced by circumstance to be in a far more interesting place on her body and the two of them struggling to resist and just about started to succumb when she was pulled out? Then at the end not letting Ron have an orgasm but then getting together with Beth to satisfy themselves again like they did on other occasions?

I loved the way you presented Lil's character in this series. Her initial dalliance with her sexuality in the red dress and the way it spiraled her into a night of lusty sex was hot. Now having that night lead to blackmail and her ultimate submission to fucking Ron was crazy hot. A series centered around her after leaving the island would be great. She could continue her struggle with her conservative values and the lingering memories of her sex filled vacation spurred on by her husband. Think about it.

Thanks for continuing. The typos were interesting. Did you plan on Ron doing Pam then switched to Lil?

Anon below pointed out my inadvertently using Pam's name rather than Lil at one point. Sorry about that.....I hate to put so much effort into a chapter then miss an obvious error like that.

What can I say.....other than at this point I guess I am thinking about Pam as much as Ron does.

If these were real people they would burst with the tension, well done. Please keep the story going

The genius of this series that it leaves both the characters and the reader frustrated, and that's what keeps us coming back for more. But at some point Jack has to give us some release. Another scene where Ron almost fucks someone only to just get off with Beth again? Boring. This was perfect. After frustrating us with the college girls, lil's blowjob, sue in the shower, we finally get a proper fuck scene and delivered in a way that keeps us on our toes until the payoff.

I admit I was concerned about Ron's sudden aggressiveness but saw at the end you had to push him over to have Beth drag him back. Great stuff.

Love the inventiveness, love the narratives...the sheer chutzpah. There is no shame in this author, which is to be applauded. It really is a fantastic thing. That being said, I guess I'll be the lone voice of dissension by saying I did not like the blackmailing twist. Definitely not a fan, especially since it is so singularly unnecessary here. These people are all ripe for the picking, no ugly threats necessary. To me, at least, everything would have been so much sexier minus the blackmailing angle.

No biggie. I remain hooked. For me this story has always been all about Pam and Ron. I could read eight hundred more chapters about those two together. I hope I do.

Amazing to me how many years I've invested in Ron, Pam and Beth. Such wonderfully fleshed out characters, I feel like I know them all. Great chapter and as always, cant wait for the next one.

One of the best chapters. I can't wait for 18. I hope it's not a long wait! Can't wait to read about Pam telling Beth what happened and maybe Ron finally nailing Pam!

The most creative and talented erotic writer period.... This is why you have your own loyal cult following that checks daily for updates.. As fans we praise your talent and thank you for the captivating way which you can tell a story.. We cannot wait to read more!! Thank you

So sexy, as always really looking forward to the next chapter. I think this is my favourite chapter so far. Hope it won't be too long but happy to wait.

Loved it! Will Leslie get some alone time with Ron? Are they headed to do some yoga, or into the sauna next? Can't wait for next chapter!

Yours has to be the only 17 part series with each of the chapters scoring more than 4.5. My only question is what do the dumbasses who give your stories less than a "5" want to be better?

I say this as a very loyal fan of this storyline, which is one of my absolute favorites. But I want to add a few critical thoughts, purely from the point of view of wanting this story to be able to go on at top quality forever. Basically I am not so sure about some of the decisions in here. I feel like you may be writing yourself into a corner. You know best, of course, since you know where this is all going. But I feel like the decision to have Beth tell Mike and Lil her plans, and to blackmail them, was out of character for her, and leaves out options for her to play with them unknowingly in the future. They may have many escapades, but it will be on a different wavelength from the "tempting" and pent-up feeling of so many of the chapters. Ron's moment in the closest also felt like it will be difficult to deal with in the future, now that they've both seen each other in sexual situations; it will be harder to keep her as the one prize that he wants but can't have now that they've been in this situation together, rubbing his cock in her butt cheeks. I feel like some dialog there could have helped, to make some cover situation so they can't discuss it again. Then the final "rape" scene seemed out of character for Ron. I know this is tied into Pam's fantasy for him, but this has tended to be more about a non-violent nonconsent reluctance--a mind fuck-- than this scene, which was more physically tense, edging on violent. Don't get me wrong, I'm no prude on this, I like that kind of story too. But it seemed less appropriate in this storyline. Again, I'm not sure how you put that genie back in the bottle, no matter what Beth says to him. Anyway, it had plenty of hot scenes, but I feel like it turned an odd, unexpected corner and I'm not sure how it will work for the future. I am happily awaiting many great chapters to come.

And, let's let Ron get some ass sex! (With Sue?)

And, let's hear more about Amy again.

Without doubt the best series on here. Has everything - please don't stop!

I agree with the previous comments about the blackmailing and Ron attacking Lil.

Both made the story edgier. Beth doing blackmailing makes her character a little crazy/darker than just manipulative. Ron pseudo attacking Lil makes it difficult to continue to believe in Beth controlling Ron.

However I could see this as the build up to some conclusion as everyone finally gives up on their facades and goes all out. Waiting to see what happens next.

And I also agree with a previous comment about adding some back door action in future chapters.... :)

I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! They just keep getting better and better!

Bring back Amy.

thank goodness you decided to write another one...

So glad to have you back on this story. While not the strongest chapter, #17 was still super hot!

In 18, I hope Amy gets fucked. Not by Ron yet, but you need to even the scales a bit on their relationship, and she really needs a cock in her mouth.

I've read a lot of stories, and none of them manage to keep the level of intensity and interest over as many words as this one. Usually by now the sex is rote and the author is struggling to bring meaningful conflict to keep up interest. I don't know how you manage it, but kudos. Like many others, I refresh this site all the time hoping for new chapters, but despite my impatience I'd honestly rather have quality than quantity, so do what you gotta do.

RE: this chapter, it reminded me of a French sex farce with people running in and out of doors and mistaken identities and highly charged situations. With Pam in the locker I thought she'd break down a bit more, maybe just a little penetration or a kiss or something, but I can see why you'd want to keep a little distance there. I for one loved the mild "nonconsensual," and while I initially chafed at Lil as a distraction, now I want to see more of her corruption and would love to see her as a foil for Beth, with both of them attempting to manipulate events to their ends and Ron/Pam caught in the middle.

Honestly, who cares about Amy?

This is officially my favorite story ever.

Jack, any idea when we might see Chapter 18? Can't wait!

Glad I found this story line. My only hope now is there is as many chapters to come as you've already written. And maybe we catch up with Amy/Sue soon.

Any update on ch 18 Jack? Refreshing every day in anticipation!

This killed me:

"Even worse, his balls and thick shaft were now lodged firmly against her own sex, the unforgiving tightness of their confines causing her engorged lips to wrap partially around his girth, as if trying to engulf it entirely, while at the same time providing non-stop stimulation to her swollen clit."

Not surprising that there are no other stories listed as being "similar" as there are no other stories like this one. My only surprise is why this story ever receives a rating other than "5." Thank you for your work.

Any news on the next instalment of the best story on this or any site? It is most eagerly awaited!

Yea Jack any news man?

Every couple of days, I look, hoping to see another installment. Wishing even.

There is nothing that compares to the emotional ups and downs for poor Ron. Please let him have some relief with Pam!

It is a great story and it helps a German guy to learn English. :-)

So please go on with it.

Thanks for sharing the story with us.

Good One

Jack. It's been years since Amy left with her dad. Beth has Ron and Pam right where she wants them. Please let the guy fuck that hot mom so we can all find a different story to refresh every day.

I've written much of.ch 18. Still lots more in my.brain waiting to find its way to the keyboard. Recent life events have taken most of my focus and free time. I plan to get back to Ron and the others soon.

Thanks for all the encouraging comments.

Great to hear Jack, take your time and I'm sure when it's done it'll be as superb as ever!

That's great Jack!

Hey Jack,

Very well written, and I'd love to read the next chapter!

(Although my wife doesn't know I'm reading this, I've got a feeling she likes it anyway...)

Will look forward to the next installment when it's ready. I may or may not be checking every day for updates.... Great job. Best series on the whole site.

All we want for new years is one more chapter of this legendary saga!!!

I won't state the obvious...this is a wonderfully written story series. My question, are there any other specific stories any of you readers would recommend that get you as hot as this one?? I've found a few, but the themes of "unaware" teasing, temptation, acting as if you don't know what is happening, reluctance, and the like are hard to find! I'd appreciate any other links!

One I especially enjoyed was Katie's Massage...

it has been 1 year from your last chapter.. please don t wait us too long.. this is our game of thrones

It's time for Pam to get hers from Ron!

Hope chapter 18 arrives soon!

Appreciate the great writing. I hope Ron turns the tables on them all.

This is the best story. love it. looking forward to part 18, hopefully soon.

best regards

as someone else said this is game of thrones of literotica.com :D

This is my favorite series of stories to read here by far. I keep checking back periodically to see if it's been updated. I can't wait for the next installment in where this uber sexual story goes! Thank you so much!

Great story, and can't wait for the next part, but I suspect it will probably be a long wait, given that it's averaging under 2 chapters per year.

Come on Jack, you're killing us here. Hope the next Chapter is coming soon. Really looking forward to it.....and more hopefully.

Love this series it's the absolute best, but any sign of the next chapter? The wait is torturous!

Also, can anyone recommend any similar stories to this?

i think he might have died

Jack, been a huge fan of the story since the beginning 13 (!) years ago. Can't wait for the next instalments. Please don't make us wait much longer - sounds like you've had Ch 18 nearly done since November :)

Keep up the great work!

Yeap u are write, i think he might be dead....or left the erotica writing business

this is the most important thing i ve been waiting in my life for the last 6 years.

Any update on the next chapter please Jack?

So, Jack, I started reading this story on another site, back about 15 years ago. Easily the best Erotica on the web. Please finish before my children and I are waiting together for the next chapters,; they're young so you have a few more years :)

I've enjoyed this whole series a lot. Great work and I'm hoping for more

This series is fantastic! Ron is such a lucky bastard! Please continue to write this story. I have re-read this series at least 20 times teasing myself the whole time!

I cannot wait....dont tease us. we need to know how Ron fares and where's Amy? are we ever going to see/hear of her again?

Amazing titiillaton and love the portrayal of

incredible satisfaction in exploring fantastic

Sex that pushes unexamined fantasy

Will you post when next one arrives?

Wow. You are the master of erotic lit! Can’t wait to see what happens next. On a down note (please don’t take it personally), I am not into the semi rape issue. I hope it will stay consensual here on, although I fully realize that it WAS consensual- just a bit on edge. Love the plot!

What an awesome story! The constant teasing gets me to the edge! Love it!

So fucking intense, I can't put it down! ;->