All Comments on 'Sigil Errors'

Poor girl. (so far)

Looking forward to a continuation, if that's what you were planning.

Looking forward to reading more. Most succubi are described as red. Didn't know they had blue states in the underworlds. Though, to be fair, I guess they could be orange or chartreuse, striped or spotted. Fun to think about.

More, please.

This story seems deliberately paced, growing, enjoyable, and competently written. Thanks, NarcissusRex!

However, in the line "I knew extraplanar beings well enough to be competent that this was all an act," 'competent' should be 'confident' to make sense.

Great start!

Excellent story! I like the fumbling and bumbling of the summoner and his dull-witted almost naive behavior once she start her seduction... yeah, he has work to do... but not if she can help it!