All Comments on 'Jacuzzi Ch. 01'

by SteveLee1146

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Verbose

Far, far too long. Could have done it all on one page

hannsghannsgabout 9 years ago
Good read

Actually I liked the longer read, it builds up the intensity of the action. It could be reduced to flash tits, possible pussy feel, but it would not be as interesting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fun stuff

The wife and I have fun with stuff like this, the planning is even more exciting than the doing.

Her tan bodysuit has snaps, she wears it to the gym and once in awhile has an "accident." Usually on the leg press machine, it's a kick to watch the other guys race to "help" her since on that machine she faces the wall with her feet.

She can actually cause the snaps to give way with some effort. We never thought of Velcro, good idea.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
all right

I have been eagerly awaiting your next story. I love the slow burn and buildup... too bad, though, that I'll have to wait for the next chapter!

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 9 years ago
Sounds like fun

Too bad the other wife us such a drag,but it dfoes mean the exposure needs a lot of planning. The story does move a little slow. It's distressing that there is no sexual contact between Jan and her husband.

elling50elling50almost 9 years ago
Love the build up

Love the waay you describe small steps getting bigger.

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